Here are the before and after samples of a Food and Beverage Manager who was not receiving interviews. She was not giving herself credit for the many functions she was performing. She also was not using keywords in her resume, which is vital to online job posting.
These are the before and after samples of a Clinical Trial Manager that needed her whole resume revamped. While the initial glance at her "before" resume format may "appear" to be satisfactory, upon closer inspection you will see that this individual was trying to include too many things and there were no complete sentences.
What you cannot see in the before resume were the spacing and spelling errors, in addition to about three different types styles used throughout the resume. She also has 1st person and 2nd person grammar styles used throughout the resume.
We eliminated the positions that were not relevant to her current goals. In addition, we provided keywords, total composition and a format that would showcase her strengths.